A Day At Home
Last Thursday my family and I was having a relaxing day at home. When I woke up I shouted “it is freezing!” My bones were ice cold. So I had breakfast and got ready for the day.
A few hours later I was getting bored at home so I decided to play my PS4. I was playing GTA 5 and I played as Franklin. I was driving my T20 around the city and shooting people. The T20 is one of the most fastest cars in the game. It was kind of fun driving around but after awhile I started to get even more bored, so I got off my game and had a long power nap.
Two hours later I got up and I was starving like I have never eaten in three days. “Can I have some Mcdonalds please dad” I asked. “Yes we can” my dad replied. So when we got to Mcdonalds, I had a juicy and delicious triple cheese burger. It tasted so delicious that it was like It was heaven. So after we had a kai we headed back home.
When we got back I started to play my game again.
An hour later It was finally time to go to sleep. So I put my pajamas on and went to bed. At the time I was so tired that I could sleep for along time. In conclusion what I thought about that day was that it was a relaxing, boring and kind of fun day but not really. I really enjoyed my burger that I had and I kind of enjoyed playing GTA 5. At times I was bored because there was nothing to do and there was no mates to play with but I still kind of enjoyed that day. Another thing I enjoyed was spending sometime with dad eating Mcdonalds with him and having some time out of the house for the day. But overall it was an alright day.
Tena koe Ricci, Its me Heaven and Im a year 8, and I am in your class room (Room 4),I really enjoyed reading your compelling recount writing. I like the way how you used metaphors in your story, and I like the way how you structured your story. Maybe next time you could improve on your punctuation marks and your grammar, so that you story is more capturing to the reader. Over all I loved reading your story and I hope to learn some tips and tricks from you. Anyways thats all from me, blog you later.
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