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Friday 26 August 2016

To Flash For Other Heros

Too Flash For Other Heros
By Ricci
I Believe That the Flash is the best superhero. Do you agree? Why I believe the Flash is the best superhero because he can travel to places super fast, he can also take down bad people plus he can dodge things fast also he is tremendously fast.

The first main reason why I think the Flash is the best super is that he can go to anywhere in a blink of an eye.  How can he do that? Ah dah he’s the flash and the flash is super fast he can even go faster  than  fastest car which is the Bugatti Chiron which goes 288 mph/ 464 km per hour. Also he can get out of danger fast. He can even see bullets going past him. How cool would that be to see bullets as they're going past you?

My second reason why I think the Flash is the best superhero is because he can help people super super  fast. For example say if I were drowning in Australia would he save? Of course he would save me.  Added to this,  he can put out fires when he goes really fast.  Would you want to get saved from the Flash? He can come to you in an instant and get you out of trouble if you are in danger like if you were getting beat up or getting robbed or something else. Also would it be cool that  the Flash fastest superhero? And the flash can go as fast as lightning can strike you. How cool is that?

In Summary I think that the Flash is the best superhero because he can go as fast as lightning and he can go to other places in an instant. As I’ve said at the beginning I believe that he is the best superhero.

Wednesday 10 August 2016

Bok Choy By Paul Mason


Bok Choy by Paul Mason

Image result for bok choy by paul mason                                        

The book that i’ve been reading is Bok Choy. This is set in Otago in the South Island in NZ 1865 on the gold mines. This is a nonfiction story but based on actual events is about Jacob that is young boy and also there is chinese man who is Ah Sum, he is a poor chinese man that is working in mine called New Gold Mountain.
After Jacob gets rescued his mother comes to get him. Then there is Mrs Bishop and her son Williams. Mrs Bishop and her son Williams is racist to that a chinese man Ah Sum.



My favourite part in this story is when Jacob gets rescued by Ah Sum. Something that surprised me was when Mrs Bishop and her son was being racist to that Chinese man.
What books have you been reading?

Friday 5 August 2016

Smoking Is Not Cool

Smoking Is not Cool
This is my first persuasive writing.              
I Believe that people should not smoke. Do you agree?

  The first reason why people should not try smoking is that smoking is addictive and it is not good if you get addictive. This means you will always want to do a it is not good. Next thing you now is you get addictive. Plus you could get addictive real quick. You could possibly die young. For example  if you are smoking at a young age you are most likely to die quickly. For a matter of fact that 5000 people die in New zealand because of smoking.


The next reason why I think you should stop smoking is if you  have a family you will have to think about your family to. Because if you smoke around them it is possible they could inhale your smoke.
That is not good because your heart and lungs could stop working. Do you not want that to happen?


Second reason why I believe people should stop smoking is because it could cause you a stroke or a heart attack and it is possible to get cancer. Do you want that to happen to you?


My next steps are:

  • Carefully read my sentences to check they make sense (mistakes in word endings)
  • Make sure I use good lead sentences that are in order
  • Put more information into my introduction
  • Leart to use emotive words
  • Learn to summarise my argument at the end.