WALT: To improve our writing through films.
SC: I will include a setting, characters, a problem, a resolution and sequence of events within my story.
Once upon a time there lived a very old man called Mr wonka. He loved flying his huge sail boat amongst the clouds. The sun was starting to set and it was getting late.
All of a sudden there was a crack. Mr.Wonka’s engine fractured apart splitting away from the stern of his sailboat. He wasn’t surprised by that. The engine needed to be replaced ages ago. It was then that Mr wonka realised that he was stranded.
There was a big thump! When Mr. Wonka looked under his sailboat he noticed that there was a huge bale of green flying turtles around him. “Holy moly” screamed Mr. Wonka. Bang, Bang, Bang.
“Help! Help!” The turtles were attacking his sailboat. They were flying around and coming at him fast. Mr. Wonka’s sailboat was going to collapse at any minute. He needed to find a way off his sailboat fast and quick. Holding his breath he jumped overboard onto a turtle.
Thump! Mr. Wonka landed hard on the turtle. “Ooh that hurt a lot!” Looking around he took in the view. It was beautiful and breathtaking. Sadly though, he saw his sailboat fall to the ground. I don’t think the turtles liked sharing the sky with Mr.Wonka and his sailboat.
To Be Continued….
