Today I have learned about spreading kindness or as it was called color someone’s canvas. We colored someone’s canvas by leaving a thoughtful comment on their blog. So we had to pick someone’s name out that was on a Popsicle stick and had to leave a thoughtful comment on that person’s blog. The person’s blog I had to comment on was Tyla’s blog. The piece of work I commented on was Tyla’s writing goal for the week. This is the comment I wrote on Tyla’s blog:
Kia ora Tyla, I like your writing goal that you have set for this week and how you have thought about your goal and how you are going to achieve it. Just to make your sentence make sense you need to have a full stop at punctuation, you need to change your last sentence around and have a capital I. But overall awesome work Tyla!
Blog ya later
Kia ora Tyla, I like your writing goal that you have set for this week and how you have thought about your goal and how you are going to achieve it. Just to make your sentence make sense you need to have a full stop at punctuation, you need to change your last sentence around and have a capital I. But overall awesome work Tyla!
Blog ya later
So that is one of the things I’ve learnt today. There a plenty more but I only had to share one.
Tena Koe Ricci,
ReplyDeleteYou have definitely coloured my canvas today. I was excited to see that you had written about sharing kindness in a blogpost. It's great that you have shared the comment that you wrote on Tyla's blogpost. You have been very positive, thoughtful and helpful - a quality blog comment and post. Well done Ricci! Do you like getting comments on your blogposts?
Tania