Mini Golf!

Kia ora, today I will be presenting my recount about my holidays.

W.A.L.T write a recount using the correct structure.

 

                            Playing Mini Golf

It was a cold and foggy Friday morning, my sister, my two uncles, my nana and I went to go play mini golf in Hamilton. I was so excited to go play mini golf with my family. So I got up and ready for the day. About twenty minutes later we get into the car and start driving to Hamilton to play mini golf and have a fun time. It looked like everyone was excited to play mini golf.

Thirty minutes later we arrive. We were all excited to play mini golf. So then we head straight into the receptionist office and went to pay to play mini golf. Straight after that we started at hole one. It took my about five to six tries to get the ball into the hole. About three or four holes later one of my uncles got a hole in one and then we all shouted. “Oh what a fluke uncle!” About fifteen holes later we were at the last hole. It took awhile for me to get my ball into the hole.

Finally we had all finished playing mini golf. “This day was awesome!” I shouted. Then we went back into the car and went back to my Nana’s house. That day was one of the most best days I’ve ever had.