It's not good feeling sick

W.A.L.T use variety of sentences types simple, compound, complex (Level 4 adverb beginning)

     It’s Not Good felling sick

Last week I was sick. it’s such a horrible feeling being sick.  “Uhhg!“ I moaned. “I'm sick!” I said. “Well, you better stay home,” dad said to me. “Okay dad I will stay in bed” I replied.

“I hate being sick!” I screamed. “ I don’t want to be in bed” I said. “Well you have to stay home to get better” Rena said to me. “Okay” I replied. I had a bit of a sore throat. It was like I was being choked. It was not a good feeling at all.   

“This is going to be boring just staying in my bed! All day long” I said to myself.  “I am  just going to be stuck in bed all day” I said. “ It’s going to be boring” I said quietly to myself. I felt so Horrible that I just had to stayed in bed For the whole day or for the week.

Rena cooked a chicken soup to make me feel better. “Yummy yummy this chicken soup is delicious” I said “That's good” Rena replied. “Hopefully this chicken soup works” I said. “I’m just going to go back to sleep and hopefully I get better” I said to myself.

What I thought was that it was not a good feeling being sick. I missed out on a whole week of school. How crazy is that? And missing out on the class speech. Also that chicken soup was delicious and helped to get my better. So for next time I will try not to get sick again. I will wear warm clothes to not get sick and stay dry.

  

People should not dump their waste into the landfill

WALT use linking phrases between paragraphs to support the development of the text.

My next learning step is to speed up my work because I only had one paragraph and the rest of the group finished their draft and had a lesson on linking phrases between paragraphs to support the development of the text. so I missed out on the learning.

 Waste, waste, waste, it's all just waste and rubbish. Just throw it in the landfill. Do you agree or disagree that people should not dump their rubbish in the landfill? Well, I agree that people should not dump their rubbish into the landfill. I will try my best to persuade you and explain why people should not dump their rubbish into the landfill.

My first reason why I think that people should not dump their rubbish into the landfill is that it’s causing pollution to the environment which is not good for our environment. It might also be hazardous.           

My second reason is that all the hazardous stuff in the landfill like batteries and computers affects the environment and people. Plus about two thirds of landfilled waste is biodegradable. Added to this leachate is toxic liquid that leaks from landfills and gets into the water system. Also if it gets into the water system people will drink it and get poisoned and die. How disastrous will that be?

My third reason why people should not dump their rubbish into the landfill is that all the biodegradable things in there rots and decomposes  producing harmful gases like carbon dioxide and methane. Adding to global warming.

In summary I think that people should not dump their rubbish into the landfill because it’s just harming the environment.                 

Fun With Mum

This is my recount. I don't what I was learning. My next step is to Write a variety of sentences types (some short, some starting with ‘talking’, some starting with an adverb.                             
 Fun With Mum By Ricci

                                                                                                

   On a Marvelous Friday afternoon Me and my mum and Kim went to Westfield mall in Riccarton.

   Firstly what we did what was obvious,  we went into the car and took off. My mum yelled out to me, “come on Ricci it's time to Go”  and I replied nicely “ok im coming, be there in a Sec” So the went into the car and put our seatbelts on and took of to Westfield Mall in Riccarton.

                     

Twenty  or so minutes later we were there, we went all the way to the top of the parking lot to find a carpark. I took ages to look for a empty carpark. I was waiting for years to find a carpark. But then…. WE FINALLY FOUND A PARKING SPOT! I shouted out loudly  “yay we found a parking spot.  By the time we found an empty car park I was like an old man.

  So then we hopped out of the car like rabbits and made our way to Kmart and Timezone.

After that we finally made it to kmart to buy some toys for me.  We were walking in Kmart then finally found the toys aisle.   The cool toys that I found was star wars spaceships The spaceships that I got was Tie  fighter, Stormtrooper transport and the ghost from the program Star Wars Rebels. The other toy I got was a big fighter jet including a guy to fly the fighter jet.

   My mum asked me “is that all you want”? I replied “Yep”so then me and my mum went to go to the counter and paid for my toys then skipped out of Kmart to go to Timezone.  

     After all off that We finally went to the final place of the day which was Timezone to play some games. Then I saw ghostbusters pinball but it was the plain version. That was the only game I played. So I jammed that game for a an hour or so until the money on the timezone was out. An hour later the card was out of money witch meant we had to go return it to the counter and then go back home. I said “oh man there is no more money left on it. So then it was a long walk back to the parking lot at the 20 minute drive back home   

                                                                          

                                                            My Reflection

   My thoughts of that day was the I had a marvelous time shopping at Kmart and playing

                                                       

 ghostbusters pinball at Timezone.  THAT WAS A COOL DAY!

Gun Fire Writing

My Big Trip To Whangarei

    My Big Trip To Whangarei

On a good sunny, Frosty morning Me, My dad, My step Mum and My little sister went to Whangarei for the day and what I had on my mind as getting some converse shoes.

First of all what we did was put on some warm clothes so when we go outside. We all Jumped in the car and we started driving to Whangarei.

Next we were going to get me converse shoes. First we found this shoe shop we had a look around. Then we found some. But guess what?  They didn’t have it in my size. My jaw dropped like it was broken, I was shredded. I said to my step mum

“Mum we must look at another shop my step mum replied “Ok ok calm down we will go to another shop and find some.  So we Rushed to the car and started driving.

Next we spent hours and hours trying to find some shoes. Finally we found the shop.  The name of the shop was called Inferno.

So we found the type of shoe I wanted. It was converse leather.

So we said to the shop owner “do you have size 5 shoes” He replied “Yes we do have size 5 shoes” I shouted “yes yes” I was so so happy.

So I tried them on I said quietly “it fits perfectly” So my step mum said “You like them I replied back “Yes   I do. So my Step mum took money out of her wallet and paid the shop owner.  Then we got back to the car.  I was so relieved about it. After A while or so we left Whangarei.

Finally we got back home. It was  9pm at night. So I got out of the car and went inside. I was so tired after today. My Dad got inside. I said to dad “Dad I’m going to go to bed now and dad replied “Ok boy goodnight I replied back to dad “Goodnight.

 

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